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Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Its reinforced Claire's idea that he had gone to the castle. It reinforced It was frightening to be in the minority in one's own ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! It was a pleasure to read it aloud. It gave me a lyrical or let's say song like feeling. Shut up Stand up ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Three years, no night shift. That just makes me think that they enjoyed a good luck for the last three years if you talk ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, welcome to YWS. Hope you have a good time here. This was a great short story. It had a lot of ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Hm. Harry Hardy. Definitely interesting. I liked the fact how you used your own username in the story. "Its a fun landing technique," said ...

Hey! Forever here with a minute review! James fired at the first millipede, the bullet harmlessly glancing off. I wonder if it's perfect to refer to the moster as the ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a tiny review! He saw being human in all its forms - as human and as animal. This line is a bit unclear to me. I ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review! I know I am painfully late. Let's get into it. There are bright lights shining through my house I tried to stop it it ...

Hey! Forever here to drop a review!! This was an interesting part. I like how Harry was not being able to control his emotions in the part and exposed it ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I just had a question. What is this destiny's touch? I thought it was time-travel but now, I doubt it. First of all, Matthew ...

Hey!!Forever here with a review!! Here we have the experience of first time travel, all the things and incidents happening before that took place. Something needed if you wanted to ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This story was quite an interesting one. I liked the storyline of the story. Something which you have got to work on is your ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Arai seemed to spot that too because her expression instantly changed to one of concern Guess what happened here. Aria changed her name and ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! Beware, I am not very good at reviewing short stories. Now let's try. Fighting with monsters and that also in a funny and ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! The first thing which I wonder about is why you have formatted the story like this. I mean it's a short story, so, you ...