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Hey! Forever here with a review!! This part was a romantic part but still it manages to have the continuous mysterious feeling throughout the chapter, especially at the end. I ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Seeing chapters from Harry's POV is always fun. So, let's get into it. Well, we have got another Summers here. Seems like Mr. Summers ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all I wonder about the others in the stage. You told us that there were 4 people on the stage but we ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all with your question, I think the quotes quite make sense and I do feel that they influence the story. However, on ...

Hey!! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was a good continuation of the previous part and I enjoyed reading it. These siblings surely have cat's eyes. Like they seem ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! First and foremost, I couldn't really understand the purpose of using Italian. All people can't know Italian and it contributes to nothing but making ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! This was an interesting read. I found it quite interesting that the whole story revolves around wolves and yet it revolves around a near ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! This was a bit relaxing part though it builds a lot of interest in the minds of the readers to see what is going ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was an interesting read. Let's get into it. The first sentence is fully in present tense. The first half of the second ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! You have gotta work a bit on the names of the chapters. Like the name if this chapter seems like an one line synopsis ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Seems like they are safe now after having a breathless run from the Aliens. I just wonder if there is any sort of head ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! I completely forgot about Bolderich until this point. We saw that he went to a new place for finding work, I wonder where he ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! How could I completely forget about reading and reviewing this... anyway, to the review. The newspaper excerpt was a good beginning to the chapter. ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a great part. I do have some random questions and guesses which flooded into my mind while reading this. So, let's get ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Why did you seriously have to leave that cliffhanger at the end? This is veryy unfair Anyway, let's get into the review. I ...