Hey! Forever here with a review!!
First and foremost, I couldn't really understand the purpose of using Italian. All people can't know Italian and it contributes to nothing but making the plot complicated. I am not very sure of it because after all, it's just the prologue and we have a whole novel left. But I would like a bit clarification on the reason why he is speaking Italian. The only thing I could infer was not to make tge boy understand the language. Also, maybe it has a reason but it might confuse people who don't know it. I think it's better to just write the dialogues in english and italicize it and sinply write on the top that italicized dialogues were spoke in Italian. It can be as simple as that.
The storyline is very interesting and I am quite eager to see what happens next. We are unaware of the fact if the demon has actually occupied the body of Damon but I guess that id goung to happen in the near future. I found it a bit ironic that the boy's name was Damon. Demon and Damon. Suspicious indeed. I wonder if the boy actually knows about whatever book the demon is asking for. We don't know about this because he didn't understand a single word of the demon. It's still a mystery to us but the main thing which I wonder about what the book is all about. Something which frees the demon of all their predicaments? Seems so.
I feel pity for the mother. She died for saving her son. But why did the demon actually invade them of all? Fpr the book obviously... Did Damon's mother know about the book of Azreal? We might not know the answer in the whole story as she is already dead. Now, Damon is an orphan, I guess provided that both his parents are dead. Also, this Adelight seems to be quite interesting to me. The war is going to be fun seeing and might be a bit deadly. The passing of the hearts is the most interesting thing in this whole story. I really liked it.
I hope that we will be getting some descriptions of how all of our characters look. Damon and the demon will be there in the upcoming chapters but I guess tge mother will not be there. So, it's better to provide some description of the appearances of Damon's mother so that the reader can actually imagine her.
Overall, it was a nice start to the novel and a very intriguing one to capture the readers.
Keep Writing!!
~Forever
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