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Re: My Mini Memoir
Hey, I'm going to review! I'm going to start from the bottom up. I liked it because you really didn't talk much about drama and all that. But I also ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Hey, ForeverWarrior here for a review! I really liked it, considering I haven't read any of the other chapters. Good job because I had a basic idea of what went ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Get Off The Stage, Sweetheart
Did you get angry at someone? Haha, just kidding. But that was the vibe I was getting from this poem. I absolutely loved it, save the one word in there. ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there
ForeverWarrior here for a review! To start off, I absolutely loved your overall message about nerds and how you are proud that you are one. I, being a fellow nerd ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: Legend of The Scale, Chapter 1.1--Trako
I cannot wait for your next chapter!!!! I think this will be really interesting, and I love your main character's name. I don't know what the scrolvs are, and I ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Spirits - Chapter 1
ForeverWarrior here for a review! Under her fingers, a tree rose to the sky, taller than all of the others. Its snaking branches spreading far enough that the trees hadn't ...
Apr 25, 2014 -
Re: .
Alright. I liked the idea of a kind of has-been that's trying to move on. I especially like the way you clearly explain what show, who she played. You have ...
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Lies
I liked the idea for this, though I don't necessarily support the message! I haven't seen a haiku on this topic. I liked that it followed the traditional haiku format. ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter One
I loved this!!! I get how it works and I loved the, "Are you ready to do something crazy?" I am so hooked now!!! I want to see about the ...
Mar 20, 2014 -
Re: Howl (The newly edited version!)
The first chapter was amazing. I felt like I was in the snow. I would like to see you kind of say something that mentions her full name but still ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Tick Tock
Hi, I am just going to give a short review of your poem. I enjoyed it, but there were a few grammatical errors you could fix. The first: "Your stuck ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses
I thought that this was an amazing new perspective on the Disney Princesses, and I absolutely loved it. I enjoyed that there was an honorable mention section for princesses that ...
Mar 18, 2014
