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ForeverWarrior

ForeverWarrior

  • Short Story » General, Literature Re: My Mini Memoir

    Hey, I'm going to review! I'm going to start from the bottom up. I liked it because you really didn't talk much about drama and all that. But I also ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy

    Hey, ForeverWarrior here for a review! I really liked it, considering I haven't read any of the other chapters. Good job because I had a basic idea of what went ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Culture Re: Get Off The Stage, Sweetheart

    Did you get angry at someone? Haha, just kidding. But that was the vibe I was getting from this poem. I absolutely loved it, save the one word in there. ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there

    ForeverWarrior here for a review! To start off, I absolutely loved your overall message about nerds and how you are proud that you are one. I, being a fellow nerd ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Legend of The Scale, Chapter 1.1--Trako

    I cannot wait for your next chapter!!!! I think this will be really interesting, and I love your main character's name. I don't know what the scrolvs are, and I ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Spirits - Chapter 1

    ForeverWarrior here for a review! Under her fingers, a tree rose to the sky, taller than all of the others. Its snaking branches spreading far enough that the trees hadn't ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: .

    Alright. I liked the idea of a kind of has-been that's trying to move on. I especially like the way you clearly explain what show, who she played. You have ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lies

    I liked the idea for this, though I don't necessarily support the message! I haven't seen a haiku on this topic. I liked that it followed the traditional haiku format. ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Truant: Chapter One

    I loved this!!! I get how it works and I loved the, "Are you ready to do something crazy?" I am so hooked now!!! I want to see about the ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl (The newly edited version!)

    The first chapter was amazing. I felt like I was in the snow. I would like to see you kind of say something that mentions her full name but still ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Tick Tock

    Hi, I am just going to give a short review of your poem. I enjoyed it, but there were a few grammatical errors you could fix. The first: "Your stuck ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    I thought that this was an amazing new perspective on the Disney Princesses, and I absolutely loved it. I enjoyed that there was an honorable mention section for princesses that ...

    Mar 18, 2014


The best books... are those that tell you what you know already.
— George Orwell, 1984