ForeverRebel

I'm sure it will. Be sure to tell me when you begin to write the novel! :)

Thanks! I was also questioning that same stanza myself, but I just hadn't gotten around to fixing it.

Thank you so much for commenting. :D I really appreciate it.

Thanks for commenting. :) I tried to do the shift enter, but it still refused to work. :(

Haha thanks for the review. It's never too late and it was much appreciated. :)

I hope that's meant in a good way...?

Thanks for taking a look at my poem. :) It means a lot to me. I really haven't had much experience with poetry, so I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Hi there. Thanks for looking at my poem. :) It wouldn't necessarily make sense if I said "is the best thing God given us". Do you think I should make ...

Thank you. I was using alliteration on the phrase "pretty piano playing playfully". I wanted the poem to look a little unique, so that's why I did the "staircase" feel. ...

Thank you so much! (: I actually wrote it a few months ago when my class was studying poems in Literature. I have another haiku that I might post about ...

Thanks for commenting on my short story. I didn't really have a set age for Kayla, maybe somewhere in her mid 20's, and she is staying with her uncle.

Thank you! On the first comment, I was meaning Mr. Wayfaring's wife died of breast cancer, not Uncle Raymond's. I'll be sure to fix that in the future. I thought ...

Thanks so much for commenting on my short story! :) I was planning on making it longer, and was going to explain some of the characters later on. I wrote ...

Thanks! Sorry it took me so long to reply. :/ I appreciate your criticism on my little short story! :) Do you think I should make it longer? I planned ...

I really enjoyed this short story. It was well said, and very engrossing for me. One thing I'd suggest: watch the spacing. Just minor mistakes here and there, but otherwise, ...