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There's only one thing I can say about this: I loved it! Got me hooked with the first sentence. I liked the way you described the bar...I mean restaurant, also ...

Woah, this, I gotta say, is unlike anything I have ever read before. I thought it was good. A few little spelling and grammar stuff, but I do believe someone ...

Oooh, this is good. I liked it, too. It seems your story is going along great. Other people got the mistakes and stuff so I'm not gonna do that. Can't ...

Oooh, just read the first chapter but this is better, in my opinion. I kind of laughed when Forrest asked her for the Windex and she saw it wasn't her ...

Well, I thought this was really good and I loved it. Not much to say since every one else kind of pointed out the spelling and grammar stuff. You got ...

Hey, this is a good idea. I don't think I've seen one like it :D Just a few grammar stuff, but other than that I liked it. You could definately ...

Interesting :shock: but well written. Although it wouldn't hurt to put some background and a few more descriptions here and there. Like why is she trying to sell the baby, ...

Oooh, I barely read the first few lines and decided I had to finish the story. Grabbed my attention, it did. I'd like to read what happens next. ella and ...

I can so totally relate. (That's a good thing). :D I like the rhyming and the beat it has all the way through. The poem was simple but affective. (in ...

Hehehe! I like this. It's simple but it's true and you can relate it to yourself, and that's what I like. This is going to be me next year. :( ...

Nice job on grabbing my attention all the way through the first part! Really liked it, but I got confused a little bit. Nothing to worry about. I liked the ...

Oh, my sister read those books. I, unfortunately, haven't. My sister says they're really good books, even though she didn't exactly like the ending of the last book. She said ...

I LOVE this book, not to mention the author. I think this is a really good book, too short though and too bad there was no sequel. I must have ...

That was good, I liked it very much. It had descriptions and it was simple (in a good way). Missing a few quotation marks here and there, but that can ...

For some reason this poem calmed me down and relaxed me. I don't know if it's supposed to do that. :D I liked the way you used the words and ...