Flux

Thanks for the review!

*son. Ironic that I mess up when giving you grammar advice. -.-

gljasdnogful';aseoighna. Beautiful!

I'm glad you quite enjoyed this! I'm also very glad for your suggestions and criticisms! They'll help me to expand this piece, and hopefully one day show you the finished/ ...

Thanks so much for the criticism! I can totally understand what you're saying -- and maybe it would be more beneficial for me to turn this from a sort of ...

Hey there! Just something I noticed and squinted my eyes at uncertainly: "Six months past ..." (Also occurred at two months, as well) This seems a little odd to me. ...

Beautiful, as always. it's insatiable, this dwelling nonsense, drinking back words that well like fountain pens I particularly loved those lines -- its really such a beautiful way to describe ...

Holy cow is this great. I really love the way you started it! start peeling back layers in two’s and three’s and watch as the skin parts from skin I ...

Firstly -- thanks everyone for reviewing! I like to give my little thank-yous here. Secondly, I also just wanted to let you know that because of your great reviews, if ...

Aw, thanks guys! It's so nice to read that I'm not alone/ people actually care to read what I write! (:

Man! I wish I were friends with Mary-sue! And Gary-stu -- gosh, he's the darn-tootinest hottest man I've ever seen! But really, this is great! It's got Mary-sue's down to ...

Wow! I'm surprised this even got any more comments on it -- I thought it was a dead post, just floating in cyberspace! @FLOWER CHILD: Well, at the time I ...

Thanks you two! And yeah, that totally helped me out Jade! I'm thinking it probably would be a good idea to put in a prologue of sorts. And Malcolm in ...

This is great! XD I loved it! Ode to F.R.E.D, i say!

Oh, thanks! That is a really good suggestion! I was thinking of adding pieces in later (*hint, hint*) but I think that adding a little more about her childhood would ...