Flux

That... was... awesome ! With a capital A-W-E-S-O-M-E! I was reading it, and chuckling.... And the YWS God? *laugh out loud* that was great. Much agreed. The money I put ...

That was cool. I'm giving you a Gold Star. I ventured into scripts for no reason, really, but I found this. I always have little conversations with my characters. Yes, ...

Suddenly from the darkness a light shown down, she floated up and up away from the lulling blackness. "Shone" down... - - - The light beckoned her to come g ...

The phone [s]shrilled[/s] trilled again; a hollow screech in [s]an other words[/s] another world's hollow house. Of course I knew who it was. I was definatly not going to answer ...

He had to use all his strength and both arms to push the heavy oak doors in to the entrance I don't think this sounds quite right to me. I ...

I'm jealous of your talent, but I agree with The.Dreamwalker. It did get very wordy. And it was hard to follow. A little more action, yes, to catch the attention.... ...

“Come over here, dear daughter,” said a dark looking woman, motioning for her eleven year old daughter to sit down, “I have news!” “Is it good?” She asked eagerly, as ...

Just like the other children on the playground, the boy wore a pair of awfully dirty, grey shoes ; dark trousers that looked slightly too small for him and a ...

She had been told by her mentor that this was one thing that only she could do. To me, I seem to think "She had been told by her mentor ...

Okay Ben, got your message. I recommend not asking me to review poetry, but I agree with other comments. It is very intense. Sort of dark, actually, from what I ...

Firstly, holy crap, this is long! XD. I think SCREAM was this long! And secondly, well, I think I have alot of reviewing ahead of me! - - - It ...

"They took good car of each other and both lived happily ever after..." I think that you mean "care" . So other than that, there were a few other things ...

Richard nodded and spoke, “I’ve promised you guys a dozen times or so that that would the last séance we ever did. I lied again and again and again. I’m ...

Only a light blue haze remained in the sky, but just as my heart beat started to measure was when my eyes fixed on the white figure inside the blue ...

Oh, man! I thought that this parody would be boring, like you described! Ha, far from! Wonderful job. I applaud this. I liked the series for a while, but now ...