Flower~Child

Hmm I am a new writer myself so I will do my best to critic this. [Whose eyes can see the angels Dancing on the candle wick? Smoke like translucent ...

I thought this was going to be a good poem, until the last line. Even still it is kinda dull. I think if you put more suspense in it then ...

I like the poem, but not the message it gives if you understand. I don't believe that you have to cut or develope eating issues to be noticed. I dunno ...

Ok, I am going to review it anyway haha sorta. Ok I will Like this if you write it in stanzas like gamechanger10 said. I like how it flows, but ...

I think this is a beautuful yet sad poem of how society works these days. I'm not sure if I am right, but this flowed perfectly in my eyes. The ...

I think this is a beautiful poem. The only thing is I think you need to capitalize every line (I don't know if that is a rule or anything) but ...

I see the whole love thing, but without puncuation and the right spelling it just doesn't flow. Look at this: Someone who loves and cares for you, And is always ...