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I think there was a contest... Is this part of it? This, as well as another piece, inspired Alianna's (not sure of spelling) contest. I've really been on a kick ...

Thanks for the feedback. I'm going to give this to my psych teacher and see what she thinks about it. The way you told us the HEART portion, it is ...

Great job. You have some rhythm issues every so often. If you read it out loud, you really can't miss them. Other than that, great work.

Exact word counts are difficult, in my opinion, so congratulations on achieving a perfect 5oo! About that.... In an embarassing turn of events, I realized that "500 Words" actually had ...

I totally dug the word count, so I added that. I also fixed the wording Azila pointed out, so now it should be all good.

It might also be neat if the "I have 500 words" counted down using the number of words as of the end of the previous paragraph. I should've talked to ...

or the Christian populace can change it themselves? the jokes i tell are rarely the same way i learned them. PS: both jokes are hilarious. i must remember them

thanks guys! I made some quick edits to further your reading experience. to those who said there should be a "sequel": I'm at a loss for sequel ideas, but hopefully ...

Oh whoops. Didn't catch than when I proofread. This was actually written a couple of years ago. This is technically non-fiction, but seeing as I didn't write anything to make ...

Thanks for the crits! writingluver5 : I'm not exactly sure how to explain why we opted for euthanization. I know the reason (we knew it would be a hassel, given ...

And as for Ron killing Harry, it doesn't really make sense. Throughout the novel Voldemort makes it clear that he will be the one to finish Harry. And then all ...

Revised my ending. Also made my wording more consistent.

"That, and the apostrophe before "'cello" kind of bothers me. It's something that really shouldn't bother me, but it kind of does. It may be a regional thing, though." - ...

1) 'Student to Teacher,' and 'Teacher to Student,' doesn't read very well. It's just so sudden and brief; it breaks the flow of the entire poem. Yeah, I wasn't sure ...

Oo, drama pours from this piece. A girl and her hair seem to get together like a girl and the B who stole her ex-boyfriend. Great job (there's really nothing ...