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Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 2
Hi Shikora here to help you bring your work out of the green room. What I like I really like that this chapter is long as well, it just gives ...
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: Unworthy Hero ~ Chapter 1
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I like I really like how you've started this story. It drew me in right away. I also like the name choice for ...
Oct 11, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 14
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I like I really like how you started this chapter. It got me into the story right away so great job. I also ...
Oct 10, 2018 -
Re: The Hate Flu
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I like Wow this story was really good. I can see the plot coming into play here. I like it that you explained ...
Oct 9, 2018 -
Re: Lunar's Adventure-Chapter 1 The Chosen One.
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I like So this story is sure interesting. I like how you start it getting right to the point. I do understand that ...
Oct 8, 2018 -
Re: Before the Dragon - Chapter 14 (LMS IV)
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I like I really how you start this chapter it got me hooked right away. Jerica walked slowly, grumbling to herself as she ...
Oct 6, 2018 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 7.1
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I liked. I was not expecting the chapter to be like this, that's for sure. It had so much action in it witch ...
Oct 5, 2018 -
Re: This World Part one
Hi @EagleFly Shikora here with a review. So this poem is very interesting. It's kind of true in a way. Now there are a few things you need to fix. ...
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: Frozen Honor: Chapter 1- The Reunion
Hi Shikora here again. What I like Wow this chapter was just amazing. I like it that you keep all your chapters nice and long. I really liked the ending ...
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: The Fighter and the Dragon
Hi Shikora here with a review like you asked. :D What I like When I saw the name to your story for the first time it just drew me in. ...
Oct 3, 2018 -
Re: Frozen Honor Chapter 1 LMS week 2
Hi Shikora here. What I like Wow this chapter was even better than the last one. I can see that your writing has gotten a lot better so keep up ...
Oct 3, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (7.1)
Hi Shikora here again to review your work. What I like Wow I can really see things moving along in this chapter. And the name you chose for this story ...
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.2
Hi Shikora here again to help bring this out of the green room for you. What I like. So I can see that this chapter is a lot better then ...
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Hi Shikora here with a review. What I liked This is a really good story and they way you started it was just brilliant. I'm very interested in the name ...
Oct 2, 2018 -
Re: rainy storm
Hi Shikora here. Wow this song is just so lovely! You have a real gift. I can see that you like writing songs to. I really like the first for ...
Oct 2, 2018