Fireweed

The only one I read was [u]My Sister's Keeper[/u] I loved it... depressing, yes, but personally I found it really well-written and engaging. And I kind of fell in love ...

Lovely, lyrical poem. ^_^ I really enjoyed it and don't have much to critique. I'll second some of the things Liz pointed out: "wordly earth" doesn't make any sense... perhaps ...

Hello! This is quite well-done- congratulations on Jenna's contest! I can see why this placed so well; you really have a gift for lovely, vivid sensual description. ^_^ The opening ...

This is well-written, and a really interesting concept! Have you read [i]The Giver[/i] by Lois Lowry? This immediately reminded me of it-it's a similar idea, and an awesome book. So, ...

Wow- that's totally creepy and disturbing but in a very effective way, the closing lines especially. This is a striking poem. My only critique is that while I like the ...

This is good- the continuous falling in love/drowning metaphor is really effective, and you have some great imagery. I second Amelia on the first line, very intriguing. [quote]with gasping breaths ...

Hmm.... I don't know how constructive I can be... I really enjoyed reading this! :D It wasn't especially deep, but I actually don't mean that in a bad way at ...

Prolly either Alice's Adventures Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carol or Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury. Fahrenheit 451 is a great book, really interesting, but odd... It wasn't the ...

Yay, music poetry! It is a good idea, and I actually thought you pulled it off very nicely- it's lighthearted and cute, and the rhyming is well-done. ^_^ Here's a ...

Nice- I can relate. Like Twit said, you could make the structure a bit more varied.The rhyme was nice and steady, but seemed a bit predictable (pride inside, right tonight, ...

Sheer genius. This makes me happy. ^_^ The rhythm was slightly off in a line or two, but since this isn't exactly the most serious, profound poem I'll let it ...

Lovely, lovely. I really enjoyed this. One small suggestion: [quote]I, earthbound, am, below, away. [/quote] This sounded awkward. Perhaps re-phrase it as "Earthbound, I'm below, away." Otherwise, eve

0_o That's a pretty amazing poem. It just really... made an impact on me. It was really well-expressed. Like someone else mentioned, I had no idea while reading it that ...

Really nice. However, it's pretty wordy. I think that good poetry delivers it's message in a clear and concise way, but still has beautiful language. Try to cut out any ...