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Chapter 1 (check it please)
This the first chapter of my book please check it and correct it in. Chapter 1 Chriss It was midday in Felon. Felon was a small village in
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A LIfe Driven By Revenge Part 1
A Life Driven By Revenge I stood there holding a long silver sword. Looking at the two mutilated corpses on the ground, I wiped my bloody sword. The corpses were ...
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Shape shifters chapter one
This is a story that is about a group of shape shifters. Everyone says this story is good but i know better so i'm asking the YWS for advice.Please critique ...
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Artemis Fowl
This is a book review about the Artemis Fowl book series by Colfer. I feel the books are great specially the last book 'Artemis fowl and the lost colony.'but i ...
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BloodLust chapter 1 part 1
Hmmm haven't posted a story in a while. Lets see if I've still got it.This is only a part of the first chapter by the way.EDITED - Thanks KaylynEDITED Again- ...
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Bloodlust Chapter 1 part 2
Sorry for the delay . Like i said before i was writing another novel as i was writing this. Hope its good. Please post comments and critiques. EDITED - Thanks ...
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BloodLust - Chapter 2, Part 1
This is Chapter two, Part one of my novel - Bloodlust.Hope you like it. Throughout and brutal critiques are appreciated.Also if you think this is too short and I should ...
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BloodLust - Prologue & Chapter 1 Part 1 [Edited]
Rated 16+ for violence.EDIT - Chapter 1 Part 2 is out. Link - HereTo those who don't know, I've already posted the first a second chapters of this story on ...
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BloodLust - Chapter 1 Part 2
Rated 16+ for violence and brief sexual hintings.Okay guys, this is Chapter 1 Part 2. Its a bit longer than the last part and I hope you'll bear with me. ...
