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This is a *really* old topic, from over 3 years ago. Locking it. =/

Awhile later, Rickyardo Fabian Rubiarez Sachiko The Rabbit Saver & Anti Undead Warlock & Anti Destroyer of Schools & Anti Child Murderer & Anti Lord of the Undead & Best ...

Rickyardo Fabian Rubiarez Sachiko The Rabbit Saver & Anti Undead Warlock & Anti Destroyer of Schools & Anti Child Murderer & Anti Lord of the Undead & Best Friend of ...

Where's *my* bedtime story? D: ...Kidding, I don't get one. Anyways though. Very cute. :3

Heh. You know, you guys, this topic is three years old. I've since edited the poem and published it in the second literary journal. I appreciate your reviews, though! xD

Thank you, all. I have made the changes.

LilyNoPants, Thank you! ^.^ I'll make the changes soon, and yes, your suggestions are very helpful. :)

Thanks, Shubi! The assignment was to write an essay about a poet and about how their life impacted and inspired their writing, so that is the main reason I focused ...

Hey, Layla! Yeah, my sister pointed out that line to me. And yes, it'll be more obvious later! Thanks. :)

Thanks, Bryr! I think your suggestion does sound good, but when I think about it, it isn't all that rare, is it? I'll think about it though, I like how ...

Thanks all! :)

Thanks! :) Actually, the main reason I'm writing it in first person is because I'm still debating on if the main character should be male or female.

*Giggles* You are so totally awesome, Ashy. :D Dreamer, I can draw the lawn mower. ^^

"The Husband" Is supposed to be a good one, I haven't read it yet, but I will soon. :D