Firearris

Greetings, Cindy. I have to admit, I didn't read the entire story. Your story does have potential from what I did read, but you have a lot that can be ...

Um, you guys. This topic is from nearly three years ago. Try not to post on or revive really old topics like this one, sometimes the author doesn't like that, ...

Hey, Ninjacookiemonster! I'm Heather, and I'll be your reviewer. =D Okay, a couple things before I get on to your piece. 1. For every piece of your own you post, ...

Hey, Emmy! I'm Firearris (Or Heather), and I'll be your reviewer today. To be honest, I'm not really sure what to say on this piece. If this is actually part ...

Hey there, Lord Anzius! Okay, for starters, you may want to up the rating on this. The main reason is just because of the word 'Fuck'. Now onto the piece, ...

Hey Emintheocean! I read the previous chapters, and I quite like this story! It's much different than the other things we normally see in the romance section (teen dramas, vampires, ...

Hey Forest! Nice story here! I have a friend who was almost like a sister to me, and I haven't really talked to her in years, but from what I've ...

Hey Amira! Ah, yes. I've read this series. *Glances at HoN books on shelf* Anyways, I think some things in this don't seem like they would happen, for example. Erik ...

Hey Hobbit, and somewhat-late....Welcome to YWS! Hahaha, I like this! When I was reading it, I was imagining it to the tune of Stray Cat Strut by Stray Cats. Very ...

Hello, Telle_04! :) Nice lyrics you have here, though there could be some improvement. First off, you should fix your capitalization and punctuation. For example... I 'm walking under the ...

Hey Jynx! Nice poem you have here. :) The only thing I noticed that you should look at is your syllable counts. What I mean by this is that when ...

Hey, Kattrain! Very nice and interesting poem you have here. :) I actually can't really find anything wrong or anything to critique about this except for one part that bugs ...

Hello, Fell! A few things bug me in this poem. One of them is that there is no capitalization or punctuation at all, maybe look into this some? Also, I ...

Hey, Wondering Kate! :) Nice poem, but its a very recycled idea. Otherwise, I think all that needs to be fixed is the punctuation. All the corrections are in bold. ...

Hello, CreativeFreak! Very nice and interesting poem, only one thing I noticed. :) I want to be a star, n oticed by others. Seen everyday. The 'N' needs to be ...