Firearris

Hello there, Pacific_Sky14! I'm Firearris (or Heather, if you prefer), and I'll be your reviewer tonight! I believe I've seen other works of yours, and I've always been a fan ...

Hello there, papersolstice! I'm Firearris (or Heather), and I'll be your reviewer tonight. =] For the most part this is good. The poem itself is very good, and the only ...

Hello there, once again, Kota! Just to let you know, you might want to do some critiques. It's best to do 2-3 critiques for every one work of your own ...

Hello there, Kota. I'll be your reviewer today. =D Okay, this is nice. Short, somewhat simple, but good. There is only really one thing that bothers me, and that is ...

Hello there, once again, allmixedup! Okay, once again you need to capitalize things. I find it somewhat hard to focus on the poem with all those lowercase letters, especially the ...

Hello there, emmylou1995! I like this poem. You did really nice with it and managed to show what you wanted to say/the story that was going on quite well. =D ...

Hello there, Allmixedup! =D For the most part, this is a decent poem. The only main thing that really bothers me is the lack of capitalization, especially in the 'I's. ...

Hello there, Heartbooks! Ah, I love your poetry. I think you did really good on this. The only thing that bothers me about this poem is the punctuation. Not every ...

Hello! I also have to agree with Lilymoore here. What you currently have is the shell of a possible poem, though I like the idea you had! I think the ...

Hello there, Kingolions! Nice poem, except for a couple mistakes in your punctuation. I walked across the sandy beach, and far away I could see , [Change to a period.] ...

Hey there, Heartbrooks. :) Ah, yeah, I believe I read this in your blog, if I recall correctly! =D I really like this poem. Romance/love poems are kind of common, ...

Hello there! I like this. It's very emotional, and nice, though it's almost more of a free-style poem. The only thing that bothers me is how repetitive it is with ...

Hello there, Butterfly! :) Okay, lets start with a few corrections. Science was boring, so was English, maths, religious education, history, geography and whatever other lessons me and Dylan did ...

Hey there, finishedmakingsense! =] This is actually decent, a lot better than other romance stories I've read. For the most part you used good grammar and spelling and you seemed ...

Hello there, kukukt007! I really enjoyed this story. Most romance stories I find here normally have a not-so-good plot, character or the spelling and grammar is horrible. But with this ...