FiguringOutLife

I don't have a melody that goes along with it yet, but I am working on that.

Thank you!!!

I don't know where I'm going yet! I find out next month. I actually wrote an entirely new one with some references to this one. I plan on posting it ...

Thank you soooooo much for your review. It REALLY helps!! I'm used to really only writing novels, so songs and poetry is new to me :) Right now, I'm planning ...

The long spacing is just a formatting thing....I can't seem to fix it haha. I went back to edit it and everything was spaced out normally. Oh well. Thanks for ...

Well it changed throughout, but in the end I think I decided he was a very close friend, with the potential to become something more. Am I right?

Thank you so much!! That really helped a lot. Any critiques I get are more than welcome. I'll message you when I update again :)

Thanks! Haha I did post it on Mother's day, or maybe the day before.

Thank you so much!!

thank you!!

Thank you! This helped a lot!

Well this did make me smile :) I like that it's a fun poem, and I also like what you did at the end. Creative and original! Nice to see ...

Thanks! I agree with you, I was debating keeping the 'on earth.' So thanks for your opinion!! Hopefully she'll like it :)

Aw, thank you! I will definitely apply those changes and work on my commas :) Thanks so much for the review!