Fibarrel

Thanks for the review. I've fixed my mistakes to make it more enjoyable for the other readers

Before commenting, I added lines because it did not let me separate the stanzas. Sorry for the inconvenience.

I'm not as professional as the rest of the reviewers but I'll give you my honest opinion. It was a very touching poem. It conveyed such a powerful emotion. I ...

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I liked the poem very much. You conveyed your thoughts well in the poem. I think that the addition of stanzas and a little more punctuation would have perfected the ...

Thank you for sharing your opinions. It really means a lot to me. :)

Thanks for the review. It means a lot. I will take to account the tips and pointers you have given me. Thanks again. :)

Thanks for the review. I will take those notes and apply them to my next piece of writing. Thanks again. :)