FemmeFatale

I liked this, even though I didn't full grasp the point. It was simple and sweet, which I liked. I like your word flow, keep writing! I would like to ...

This was reall nice. Even though it made me partially sad at the end, it was wonderful writing. I like the flow of your words, the mesh together nicely! Your ...

This was fantastic. You are a brillian writer! I love your flow of words, it is so efforeless. You captured me from the beginning and held me to the end. ...

Okay, I know this sounds weird, but I love this even though I partially dont get it. The end of this narritive, my heart knew what you were saying, but ...

This was really fantastic. Even though you broke your words up alot by using periods, it did not make your poem choppy. It ran together smoothly, like a thumping heart ...

WOWZERS! this was really beautiful. I guess I think it was so amazing because i can relate so much to it, as can many other readers I'm sure. Your last ...

Why are you so good a writer!!! I loved this! ALOT! This flowed so easily that it showed that you really knew and understood your characters. The narrator is insanely ...

This is really beautiful, but really sad (I hope this didn't really happen to you, but if it did im sorry :-() Anywho, your writing is superb, it almost stopped ...

This was really fantastic! I love the easy flow of your words. The first sentence "The sky’s summerblue with simmering dust." really did a good job of drawing me in. ...

Wow, that was amazing. Really sad, but amazing. You transfer your flow of thoughts to paper very well. You incorporate a wide range of things so that everyone has at ...

Wow....would it be cheezy for me to say that this poem pretty much blew my mind? It drew me in at the first sentence and all of the sudden I ...

I liked this alot. There was only a few things that need tweaking. First, thing was the sentence: "He tried to ata his thoughts:" Maybe you meant to say "gather ...

This was realllyy good. I had a good idea of what was going on even though I hadnt read the previous three chapters (which I will) which is a great ...

I really liked this. The way you transition from one paragraph into the next really helps your whole work flow together. The paragraph that started with "But I'm still a ...

I love the way you started off the prologue. The descriptive way you set the scene and depicted the man that was to give the results of the competition was ...