Feltrix

Fitzgerald, he...he actually shut down the post? This is a dark day. A very dark day indeed.

...of people toO foolish... with to o's if you're wondering, I did that on purpose.

If I pretended to see something I didn't, would I pretend to pretend not to see something invisible? Or would I pretend not to see what I did see....even if ...

I'm with Drac.

About the recent message, I never thought I'd say this but....Huh?

You're 99 too?! What are the odds?

Okay, I'm really enjoying these. And I disagree with Mage on the fact that I think that present tense is good here as this newspaper is obviously very comic and ...

In that case, it makes sense.

Anyone who read all or some of this, thank you. I appreciate your dedication. Anyone who left suggestions I appreciate even more. However, no one needs to ever tell me ...

I don't have enough criticism for a full review, but I would speak in past tense. Present tense only makes sense to me when you're writing in second person (yes, ...

*sighs* You're probably right...

Pfft, everyone needs advice. Nothing is perfect. It can always be better. I'll proceed to break it up; thanks for the advice.

I've noticed the pacing problem my self. I think that I really proofread. I will proceed to break up the story as soon as I can. But...are you saying I ...

Yeah, I know, but then I'll need 1,013 more points, plus I add a new chapter every few days.

Okay, the first 53 chapters should be published now. It's kinda long, but I'd appreciate any advice.