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Re: Lovers and Fools
I agree with previous reviewer. This is a very very long story. You need to split it into many parrts and post it here. It is hard to read in ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Dimidius : Chapter Two
Hi fellow writer, here to give you a quick review. I haven't read your first part of the story, I came directly here. I hope you don't mind me commenting ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 27:
Hi fellow writer. I am here to review this chapter to get it out of the dreadful green room. I hope you don't mind me reviewing this chapter without reading ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Eight
Hi fellow writer. Sorry I haven't read any other part of your story. I hope you don't mind me reviewing this chapter of yours without reading any of the previous ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Mathematical tribute to Young Writers Society.
Okay then. I don't have anything to say. Character: 10/10 Plot: 10/10 Execution: 10/10 Writing: 10/10 Overall: 10/10 Nothing compares to this beautifully thought out romance. This. Was. Really. Intere
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: My First Lyrical Poem, The Night by ScarletDreams14
Hello Writer Scarlet! I'll share some thought about your poem. This was quite a good attempt for rough draft. I liked it very much. The repetition of words is perfectly ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: The Scarred Face.
Oh my god! This was outstanding! Sorry for giving another review but I need some points for posting a new work,so let's start off... This Is REALLY GOOD! The last ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Color it Green (Or so it would seem)
Hello writer, I'll share some thoughts on your poem. To start off, this is quite a good attempt. The imageries were vivid and colorful. Quite neatly used. The rhythm was ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: Ghost
Powerful! I came here thinking this is a horror story but it turned out to be something else. It's a surprising story. I think this is more of a story ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: The Flight was on time...
Much better, I would say. It's like someone who scores 40% in each exam suddenly gets 60%. I like the concept. But the execution is downright atrocious. Initially I thought ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: A mysterious one sentence story...
So you have managed to grab my attention yet again Mr. SportyWriter. It is said that writing a terrible work is quite a difficult job. But I guess it comes ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams
Mrs.Doubtfire was brilliance by Robin Williams. It would'nt have been half as good without him. Your essay or prayer was quite short but I found it quite good because it ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight
I don't exactly know what "spotlight' you are talking about. But honestly this is extremely stupid work you have submitted here. And please note that this is 'Not a Short ...
Aug 18, 2014 -
Re: The relation that was never made.
Hello writer, I'll give a quick review here. Ok so I'm going to be a bid rude, but frankly speaking, I couldn't really follow your story till the end. The ...
Aug 18, 2014
