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Farhan

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Lovers and Fools

    I agree with previous reviewer. This is a very very long story. You need to split it into many parrts and post it here. It is hard to read in ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dimidius : Chapter Two

    Hi fellow writer, here to give you a quick review. I haven't read your first part of the story, I came directly here. I hope you don't mind me commenting ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: LAPIS :Chapter 27:

    Hi fellow writer. I am here to review this chapter to get it out of the dreadful green room. I hope you don't mind me reviewing this chapter without reading ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Eight

    Hi fellow writer. Sorry I haven't read any other part of your story. I hope you don't mind me reviewing this chapter of yours without reading any of the previous ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Humor, General Re: Mathematical tribute to Young Writers Society.

    Okay then. I don't have anything to say. Character: 10/10 Plot: 10/10 Execution: 10/10 Writing: 10/10 Overall: 10/10 Nothing compares to this beautifully thought out romance. This. Was. Really. Intere

    Dec 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: My First Lyrical Poem, The Night by ScarletDreams14

    Hello Writer Scarlet! I'll share some thought about your poem. This was quite a good attempt for rough draft. I liked it very much. The repetition of words is perfectly ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Scarred Face.

    Oh my god! This was outstanding! Sorry for giving another review but I need some points for posting a new work,so let's start off... This Is REALLY GOOD! The last ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Color it Green (Or so it would seem)

    Hello writer, I'll share some thoughts on your poem. To start off, this is quite a good attempt. The imageries were vivid and colorful. Quite neatly used. The rhythm was ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost

    Powerful! I came here thinking this is a horror story but it turned out to be something else. It's a surprising story. I think this is more of a story ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Flight was on time...

    Much better, I would say. It's like someone who scores 40% in each exam suddenly gets 60%. I like the concept. But the execution is downright atrocious. Initially I thought ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: A mysterious one sentence story...

    So you have managed to grab my attention yet again Mr. SportyWriter. It is said that writing a terrible work is quite a difficult job. But I guess it comes ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Other Re: A Prayer for Robin Williams

    Mrs.Doubtfire was brilliance by Robin Williams. It would'nt have been half as good without him. Your essay or prayer was quite short but I found it quite good because it ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight

    I don't exactly know what "spotlight' you are talking about. But honestly this is extremely stupid work you have submitted here. And please note that this is 'Not a Short ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The relation that was never made.

    Hello writer, I'll give a quick review here. Ok so I'm going to be a bid rude, but frankly speaking, I couldn't really follow your story till the end. The ...

    Aug 18, 2014


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