Faery007

Sorry I don't have time for a real review, but I really loved this. It reminded me of Larkin poetry, however slightly more optimistic :P The tone was fitting and ...

Thank you to everyone who commented on this piece, I am so grateful to all of you. I am going to keep writing and hopefully never stop! Dreamwriting2611: Thank you! ...

Hiya, I forgot to let you know I came back and reviewed your piece fully :) HAYLEY xx

Hiya, So, first off, I really liked this poem..Even thought there could have been a little more emotive language in it, it was a very good for review. Faces of ...

Hiya again, My message came through twice by accident, don't think I'm trying to spam you or anything :) I get confused easily, sorry about that..it's my lousey genes :( ...

Hiya, This poem had a really great concept. You told it in a very clear tone, and the style was so simple which made it easy to read and the ...

Thank you. Sometimes people need people not for critiques, not for misconceptions, but for thoughts. It's nice to know that after writing it, you liked it. ~ Vi.

Hi Kat, I would have liked to continued it and make it longer in length but I was worried it might have sounded to repetitive, as I have started each ...

Thank you very much, knightlyangel09, that really helped me! I like your review and I now know not to go to overboard on the rhyme, as if I do, I ...

Thank you everyone for all you comments, yes, I do think the rhyming near the end is terribly off, but I did not notice to be honest when I was ...

Hello, I wrote this poem yesterday and I can't figure out how to get rid of the line spacing, does anyone know how? Thanks you for all your comments on ...

Thank you, Angel of Death as well, your critique will help me shape my next poem that I will be submitting shortly ^^

Thank you, Rosey Unicorn, that helped me, it's one of the first poems I have written and so that helped me ^^ I will bear that in mind when I ...

WOW its got an AMAAAAAZING stanza and if ure only 14 then ure sure 2 get noticed!

I think its brill i mean if u dont like it then dont take my word 4 it (i'm only 13!) :roll: