The unbreakable Vow

by Faery007
  • January 5, 2009
  • Poetry
  • Dramatic

The Unbreakable Vow
By Hayley, faery007

When you promise you’ll be home,
When you promise you’ll never tell,

One thing I remember you saying,
“We will take the unbreakable vow”

When you told me you never lied
When you told me a moment from now,

One thing I remember you saying,
“We will take the unbreakable vow”

And yet 5 years on from the past
When we’re having the same old row,

One thing I remember you saying,
“We will take the unbreakable vow.”

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Faery007 commented · Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:49 pm

Hello, I wrote this poem yesterday and I can't figure out how to get rid of the line spacing, does anyone know how?
Thanks you for all your comments on my previous poem, and hopefully my next piece will NOT rhyme! Sorry, I have a habit of making rhyming poems, 0_0

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here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings