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Re: The Song of Spring
Hi, Let me first say that I liked your poem. It is simple and descriptive. Some words of advice. Your rhythm becomes a little stilted when you end every line ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Ryder R. Hood
Hey, First things first, I love fairy tale rewrites and this one was exceptional. I really liked the way you kept the plot but twisted it into something original. Instead ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Hold Me Gently
Hey, I love the way you put a perfect relationship into words. This poem is so simple and I think that is one of the really beautiful things about it. ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Mutiny
I really liked your poem. It tells in interesting story and is well crafted. I admire the work you put into the rhyme and the meter of the poem. The ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: The Fractured Hour - Part I
Hi, First let me say that I really like the story. It has a lot of potential and I definitely want to read the next part. The story is interesting ...
Apr 9, 2015 -
Re: An Unusually Sunny Face
Hi, I really liked your poem. It has a cadence that is almost repetitive. I think that the cadence emphasizes the thematic content of the poem very well and is ...
Apr 9, 2015