FabihaNeera

Np :D

Ah, I see... thank you :) I'll see how I can fix it.

And Also, for the "Surrounded by darkness, all unforgiving" line, I wanted it to mean that the world gives us life, while all around it is the darkness of space ...

Thank you so much for the awesome review! You actually understood every line that I thought might be confusing... especially the "dove" and the "ultimate cost". You are a thorough ...

Thank you for having such high thoughts on this! And thanks for the feedback :)

your welcome :)

Thanks! :D

Np :D

Hello, I love this, so relatable!! Of course, it's national poetry month... a little stressful! Honestly, I could probably vote for this poem lol :D I mean, it doesn't hurt ...

Thank you!! :D

Thank you for taking the time to review! I have made these edits :D And yes the "bright dots in the sky" is meant to be a metaphor for "stars". ...

Thank you so much for the feedback and kind words! I'll make sure to keep these details I missed in mind.

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated :D I actually write a shorter version for this a while back and decided to add more detail for this one. Welcome to YWS ...

No problem :D And I can't wait until you do!

Thank you for the kind words!! :D