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Thank you both for your feedback. Ancientforever, yes that was meant to say "would be" and there was supposed to be a comma after "home." Thank you for catching those ...

Thank you so much everyone for the reviews. =]

Thank you all so much. And hehe, Jabbsies ^^ I showed it to him and he got that "Oh em gee" look on his face and said he loved it. ...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone. ^^ And YES, I always get waste/waist confused. It was meant to be waist. Thanks.

Peanut, I loved Wintergirls. ^^

Muahaha, Long Island traffic is indeed treacherous (even though I don't yet drive xD). Thanks for your reviews. ^^

xD Shina, thanks for the awesome review. They're not lovers. :P This poem was about my mom and I, so it should be read differently than a romantic-poem-is-romantic poem. xD ...

Anti-pop! Hi! I am so sorry it took me this long to finish my review. But school got the better of me, y'know? So I'm back now, ready to review. ...

Okay! Thank you guys so much for the helpful reviews. It seems there's been some confusion about the bird of paradise thing, though? A bird of paradise is, actually, a ...

Hi there. Finished reading. :D I noticed some grammar mistakes and pointed them out, but my computer went wacky and I don't particularly want to go back and search for ...

Haha, Em, this is awesomeness. I can't even give you a proper crit 'cause I'm laughing too hard. Ebil Pat Buchanan!

Haha, thanks Em. But I probably have way weirder dreams than you do anywayz. xD

Haha, I actually get this! And Mobty Python's awesome. I like it. Nothing I can offer a critique on. That said, gold star for you. :D

Oh. My. God. Meep, you are amazing. I mean, mutilating Bella is just about the best thing in the world, now, isn't it? And poking fun at Edward isn't too ...

Haha, Twin. I fixed it. But gasp! You spelled "usual" wrong! One l, not two! Tsk tsk. xD But you know I love ya, and yes, you should feel very ...