ExOmelas

Thanks, Drac! Your suggestions sound good :)

Thanks for the review! :D

@Dracula told you it'd be soon :P

You're welcome :)

Ahaha fair enough xD

Oh, whoops, it's cos they're the smallest xD Will put that in. Also dammit I keep spelling Kernik wrong. Grew up together sounds fine. Ah, what I meant was that ...

Thanks for the review! :D

That's great :D

Oh, btw, unless it's on purpose, the title should be spelled "Seduction"

Hm... had that comment about the opening paragraph before. Will see what I can do. Description: hahaha that's ironic xD Thanks for the review :D

Thanks for the review, Iggy! Huh, I didn't know that "round" was slang - good to know. I'll give that dialogue thing a look... and possibly change my grammar correction ...

Thanks, Hannah! Most of what you just said is exactly what I tried to get across :D

Oops, meant to start it with that. It is on my document xD Will take out the second almost. Thanks for the review! :D (p.s. I saw this chapter on ...

Ah yes that is exactly what it is. I will find a way to make this clear as day somewhere xD 1.5 - that works I'll try to put some ...

Hey, going to reply to both reviews here. 1.4 - Hm, it's kind of necessary for the plot for Chip to see what's going on, but maybe he could just ...