ExOmelas

Hey, thanks so much for the review! Most of this has been exactly the reaction I was hoping for, there's just one thing that doesn't seem to have quite worked. ...

Oh also yeah it's a different ship. It's Lestili, actually. She was chasing Ennet and Grescin when they got to Janny's original ship. Maybe I didn't make that clear :/

Hey, thanks for the review! So, a Daerian comes from the planet Daer-Ta, but Daer-Ta has more than one sentient species. Janny belongs to one of those species, Fladians (from ...

Hmmm I think I see what you mean. Maybe I could explicitly compare the treehouse to a children's plaything (somehow I doubt they had jungle gyms around the time of ...

... I forgot about the apostrophe percentage sign thing on mobile...

Hey, I was wondering if you could go into more depth about the vibe places have thing? I think I know what you mean but unsure how I%u2019d go about ...

oh, also just occurred to me that if I do it as a song, the narration can interject with Buck's reflection about various lines and in that way convey how ...

Ohhh, oops! He was meant to come in to tell her that he wanted private dinners, and then the same reaction would happen, but I wrote the conversation wrong. I'll ...

ah, that sounds like it would work yeah :)

cool cool, sounds good :)

Hey, thanks so much for the review! I was a bit worried that I was being too expositional with Buck telling the reader essentially what the duchess is like, but ...

Thanks for such a quick review! :D

Hey, thanks for the review! There's an awful lot of stuff culminating here but as briefly as I can: They all started out at Tayburn Zoo. They are secretly talking ...

Ohhh yeah I forgot Endoleons were vulnerable to light! That is mentioned in previous chapters but this was my entry for the summer novella challenge so it's been a while ...

Okay, cool :D