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Entirely fair from both of you xD

ah, you know what i think i've figured out why this is seeming anticlimactic for @IcyFlame. when you say it's "less exciting" i realise that makes sense because there's less ...

Hey, thanks for the review! Yeah I absolutely see what you mean about Erson being a bit all over the place. I'm getting to that point in the story where ...

Hey, thanks for the review! Yeah, it is a bit anticlimactic on reflection... I think I started building towards the next bit too fast - my planning's a bit off ...

Awww thank you so much ^.^ Yeah, the green marks are the hook into the theoretical next bit of the story, where Janny and Cri go searching for a cure. ...

Holy wow! That's a whole lot of really good reviews to do in one day :O What you have happened across is my entry for a Summer Novella Challenge some ...

not at all no ^.^

Yes I am planning on posting more! I'm sort of falling behind on posting it because I get so used to waiting on the two reviews and then forget to ...

Ahhh I see what you mean - fair enough :)

Yeah I get what you're meaning there. I think if I was reading this, this *would* be a pay-off for the build-up. Like, this is the moment where something had ...

Hmm i'm a little confused here about the foreshadowing. That was kind of the point, misdirecting the reader. It was meant to be like a fake - "oh, clearly someone ...

oh my GOD i only just realised that both Haldane and the mouse are named Sue *facepalm*

i get what you mean with Famous Five yeah. the original thing I'd been writing was about 5000 words for an "episode" so probably a good bit shorter. but as ...

Yeah as you may have noticed science is not my thing xD One of the most consistent reviewers on this story (ShadowVyper) is doing a freaking masters degree in marine ...

Not gonna reply to every individual one of these until I get to the end but interestingly I did envision this as a TV show at first, a long time ...