ExOmelas

Heyo, let's a-go again! Nit-picks: That was definitely Max, since they were trying to run. This is a kind of weird nit-pick, but I kind of feel like this sentence ...

Alrighty, let's get started on this. Eleven chapters behind, eh? *Cracks knuckles* Nit-picks (well, nit-pick singular as it turns out): She sauntered off the ramp and reached over to ruffle ...

Hey, I forget if you asked me to read this part but oh well, I'm having fun. Plus it's review day :P Nit-picks: She would get away with neither at ...

Alrighty, here goes a proper review... By which I mean I'm going to bother with nit-picks :P Nit-picks: Her father liked to charge 6 silver an hour, and she had ...

Hey, I read through this for context before reading the other chapters so figured I might as well give you a review on it anyway. I assume you've got lots ...

Oh thank Christ a chapter of under 2000 words! Nit-picks: “Just what the fuck are you doing, you son of a fucking bitch?!” I screamed. Thaaaaaaat seems a bit disproportionate. ...

Hi there, continuing my stroll through the "oldest" tab in the green room... Nit-picks: He walked through his mind. He did what sorry? “Damn it, there is still a lot ...

Hi there, I'm here to try and finally get this work out of the green room! Nit-picks: I massage it gently then peel my fingers away to reveal the tiny ...

Hey there, I just discovered that the green room is stuffed full of works, so here goes my attempt to thin it down! Nit-picks: “I can’t believe the past was ...

Alright, first up in my Cake Day review extravaganza! Nit-picks: A feather light ly touch tickled her knuckles Asha never wanted Yuni to wash her cloak ever again because it ...

Alrighty, here we go on this review! Nit-picks and nice moments (well, singular nice moment. when i'm in a rush those are usually the first to go/not get mentioned, but ...

Heyyyy you know what's a good motivator to review - procrastination from uni! *sigh* Nit-picks: (would do nice moments but I'm on like 4 hours sleep so just assume you're ...

Totally not procrastinating... Nit-picks: It was barely sundown, but Asha was breathing heavily, sweat dripping from her hairline and blurring her vision. I'm unsure why that's a "but", like what ...

I get the feeling trying to catch up to this on one review a day might not work, at least not to try and catch it in the green room, ...

Hey there, decided I'm gonna try and follow this novel (or at least get the other three chapters out the Green Room xD) Nit-picks and nice moments: Though she was ...