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Hey, I'm doing Team Tortoise this month which is where you try to do a review a day for a month, so you'll probably see me for the next couple ...

Hi there, just doing some Green Room reviews. Apologies for not having read the other chapters, but hopefully I'll be able to give you some advice about this chapter as ...

Hey there, team tortoise day 2. Nit-picks: Before I left the Island, Isaac encouraged me to go to a shrink but if I did, I’d come out crazier than when ...

Hey, spotted this in the green room and realised I was behind by a couple of chapters. Nit-picks: another reminder of why I need to stop fighting people and the ...

I made it! Nit-picks and nice moments: “You’re giving me flashbacks to the time I thought Ellie was going to leave us for Google Translate.” This like, literally just happened ...

What... what is this place? I hear it is called the Room of Green. I remember now... my, it's been so long! Nit-picks and nice moments: The crew dashed through ...

Ah, I almost made it to this one last night but then a weird emotional thing happened (don't worry, nothing bad) and I completely lost all energy. Let's see if ...

Almost there... Nit-picks and nice moments: And then Independent Titan destroyed the citizen databases. I'm not one hundred per cent sure if I don't understand the implication of this or ...

Starting to get towards caught up now... Nit-picks: Andra smiled awkwardly. I think they wore dangling earrings for the interview, but I could be wrong. I heard later that Andra ...

Nit-picks: Tejal scrambled to pick up the tablet and aim the camera at the specifus. Wait, what camera? Why camera? Heck. Ellipse had not come up with a good lie ...

Here we go again! Nit-picks and nice moments: She wore one of Tejal’s old jackets, a hard-shell zip-up he had outgrown during their galivanting It would never have occurred to ...

Hi again :) Nit-picks: Then she would not have been slapped with an influx of messages from Earth; she would have just gotten all of them as they were sent. ...

I'm baaaaack!! Nit-picks and nice moments: Focci had reprogrammed the piloting assistance to prevent Ellipse from flying as fast as she usually did, which was absolutely unnecessary I didn't realise ...

Alrighty, let's get review day on the road! Warning: this is one of the harsher reviews I've ever given you, but it's your own fault for setting yourself such a ...

Heyo, I am finally here! Sorry it took so long xD Nit-picks: After that, I ditched her to make up and make out with Finn in the bathroom. This is ...