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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night 22

    Hey, I made it! You, my friend, have zero nit-picks to speak of :D The only thing I want to pick up on is more of a continuous issue than ...

    Jun 22, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 10 - Slow Evening

    Hey, sorry this ended up taking so long. Ended up being a bunch of different chapters I'd been waiting for got dropped into the Green Room all at once. Anyways, ...

    Jun 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Conics Unfortunately: 70

    I got frustrated with trying to plan the setting for my own LMS novel for next round, so ima hide out here where I don't have to make my brain ...

    Jun 14, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night 21.2

    Alrighty, let's get this show on the road: Nit-picks: Asha’s stomach dropped. It hadn’t occurred to her that she should have behaved like Aiya was a princess. She seemed so ...

    Jun 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 69

    Alrighty, Team Tortoise is a-go! I have literally one nit-pick and it's a typo: whether it comes from my way or doing things or yours. And here's my favourite nice ...

    Jun 13, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 9 - Just Your Friendly Neighborhood Stalker

    Ah, screw it, this is going to run out sooner or later. Might as well force myself to do extra green room reviews this month. Nit-picks: She was a pretty, ...

    Jun 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 8 - Snitches Get Stitches

    Hey, sorry I didn't drop by yesterday. A different story I follow finally dropped a chapter after months of hiatus. Nit-picks: He should have looked like a toad, but the ...

    Jun 12, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Moon Needs Her Night 21.1

    *Furiously reviews* Nit-picks and nice moments: She had finally caught up with him as he was pushing through a large, heavy set of doors quite different from what she had ...

    Jun 11, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 7 - Gigs

    Hey, going to be a bit distracted during this one, but have already read through and found no nit-picks so that should help my flow not be too stop-start. Yeeeeeees! ...

    Jun 10, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 5 - Cold Tea Kind of Girl

    Alrighty, little later in the day today. Blame the tennis. Also Simona Halep is basically me and her win today makes me unbelievably happy :D Nit-picks and nice moments: First ...

    Jun 9, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 4 – Faustian Pact

    Hey, like Iggy I also have no nit-picks, so that's great! I do have a question. Is the conclusion I'm meant to draw from the timing of the Nobel night ...

    Jun 8, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 3 – The Never-Ending Pity Party

    Here we go again! Nit-picks: Only the week before, a video had gone viral, of his drunken ass swimming with the exotic fishes he had in his pool. Animal welfare ...

    Jun 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 2 - My Programed Death

    Hiya, sorry I went away for a couple of days, a novel I've been following a while posted two chapters so I did those for my last two Team Tortoise ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 68

    Hey, I feel like I started reviewing this yesterday and then forgot about it so I may be cutting it fine for Team Tortoise but let's give it a shot! ...

    Jun 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Conics Unfortunately: 67

    Alrighty, first of two Team Tortoise reviews coming your way this week. Nit-picks and nice moments: Ellipse was not sure how she felt about seeing it again. Thiiiis seems like ...

    Jun 4, 2018


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