Evi

Hey Sela, it's Evi again! Had to continue what I started, of course. I shall delve straight in! :arrow: I loved the formal tone of the first segement, but, alas, ...

Hey Sela! I saw this on the front page and thought it looked interesting! I'm a sucker for fairytale-spin offs. :D So, you don't really want nitpicks? :? I shall ...

Hey, deafwriter, Evi here! I saw that your poor chapter had no reviews, and wanted to fix that. So, hold on tight! :arrow: Alright. I hate having to say this, ...

Evi here! I was immediately drawn in by the title; either you changed it since the last reviews, or everyone else is crazy. 'This town Doesn't Have Sidewalks'? Brilliant! I ...

So! This is rather beautiuful. You bring the entire poem together at the end, and your balance of short and long lines is actually not as irritating as I first ...

Hey, Evi here! I actually though tthis poem was beautiful! However, I fail epically at deciphering meaning in deep poems like this one. so, you'll have to bear with me. ...

Wow! This is a great little plot you have going. Will it be expanded? So, the dreaded nit-picks are actually not coming today. I can tell that you proof-read this ...

Wow. This is short, and, to my disappointment, I have no nitpicks. :? Good/bad, because I can't feel helpful. First of all: is this the end? It's the end for ...

I shall be incredibly unhelpful and say that I loved the conflict, like Kalliope and Nutty. You do have a wonderful style, and I like this little story a lot. ...

First of all, CBF, I'd like to worship you for worshipping my 'Dusting Off Angels'. Your points were icredibly helpful, and I shall heed you advice. :wink: “He’s kind of…” ...

So, dear Hannah, I shall attempt to be as in-depth as possible for such short notice, but I can't promise oodles of nit-picking like in CotPC. 'Kay? You'll just have ...

Hey Ducati! I've seen you around a lot, and you were in chat with me, and then I saw that this lovely little poem of yours had no reviews! I ...

One more step and we'll be together. One more step and we'll hold hands. One more step and we'll love each other. A step I can't take 'cause you're too ...

Hey sparkle! Welcome to YWS! Just a few notes before I get to the crit: You need to maintain a ratio of 2:1 with reviews and stuff posted. Like, if ...

My love, I dreamed the most beautiful of dreams. You were there too. Where your life ended was were the dream began, in the middle of the “big blue”. I ...