Evi

Hey, how're you doing? *shakes hand* I'm Evi, nice to meet you. So, I like this, actually. Your list is very passionate and uses good abstract objects without straying too ...

Welcome to YWS, fifita! I'm Evi. You can PM me if you need any help around. First of all, hun, read The Rules . They are our YWS commandments, and ...

*Evi alert* Hola Dem, fancy seeing you here! :D No one to catch When I fall. This would have to be 'no one to catch me when I fall' if ...

Aww! This was sweet it a slightly depressing way. I'm assuming the fading star...died? :cry: Oh how bright your smile! I don't like 'ohs' in poems. They're just filler words, ...

*Evi alert* 'Ello, Rockstarz dear, I'm Evi and I shall take a look at your lovely little poem today! I do agree with the above review that you need to ...

Just to warn you, I really have no idea how to critique this, since my knowledge of your subject is most likely bordering on non-existant. :wink: That said, I'm going ...

I blame YOU! For making my day. But Mars, my dear, I truly must say I can't review your script now, for I musn't delay I'll be back soon, and ...

Expect the weirdness. :shock: Understatement. Now, you posted in my Will Review for Food thread, so I think you've at least earned the right to an honest review. All things ...

Hey, anti-pop! Or, using June's nickname, Popster! Or, Aunty Pop! There's a world of possibilities. :lol: I'm PMing you and reviewing you at the same time, so this might be ...

First of all: It is not too short. Don't worry, and don't apologize for it being short. If it had been long, I might not have been able to keep ...

Almost done! I think I'll make the three-day guarantee after all! :wink: Damn, I commented on my stupidity, All the other thoughts are in italics; why isn't this one? Consistancy ...

The crunch of impact sounded strange. Without the continuous echoes of my every move, the world sounded eerily quiet. As I choked on the raiding dirt, I hastily looked around ...

I guess I;m here for a 'constructive review'! Listen to my silence, the silence between your words we’ll go through this life side by side, childish kindred birds. These last ...

Your reviews haven't counted probably because they aren't long enough. If you look at some other reviewers, especially the ones in purple, you can see that critiques need to be ...

I lay there for a moment, lost in my reverie, only to be snapped out of it by a sharp pain to my right wrist. Again! He's going to feel ...