Evi

Hey Mat! ^^ Here as requested. So sorry that your story has been neglected. :wink: :arrow: One of the first things I noticed is the choppiness of your sentence structure. ...

Hey, QueenB, congrats on your first posted piece! *throws confetti* I'm honored to review it for you. ^^ I see that you already are ahead of the ratio, so I ...

So. First of all, this needs to be rated R because of language. Any time you use the f-word, no matter the poem or story's subject and content, you have ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! ^^ Since you have such an excruciatingly long username, I hereby nickname you Perchy. Okay? 8) Good. Now that that's cleared up, I'm Evi, and I ...

Hiya BloodStained! Evi here. 8) I thought I'd take a look at your lovely poem. Hooray! You get my 150th review! ^^ It's quiet here. I don't like the silence. ...

Here as requested again, PoemPerson! I hope that the reason you're posting a lot in my thread is that I'm being helpful? ^^ I've got the admit, this doesn't make ...

Hey Kaila! ^^ Here as requested. Sorry about the wait. The second I take it away, he might think that I was moving it away from him. The entire first ...

Yay! I'm entering the contest, too. :wink: The more the merrier, I say! You don't have to review anything in return, love. ^^ Thanks for using my thread. I see ...

Hey, Gift! Nice to meet you, I'm Evi. ^^ So, to address your questions: :arrow: Punctuation in Poetry Really, it's up to you. Some people like to leave their poetry ...

Hey Megan! I'm Evi; nice to meet you. :D I'll take a look at your poem today. Alright, I feel that you should be forewarned for the future-- using an ...

Hiya! I'm Evi and I'll be your reviewer today. *bows* :arrow: Lungs: There are certain words that you just don't often stumble across in poetry. One of suchwords is 'lungs', ...

Welcome to YWS, White Shadow! *throws confetti* It's only a matter of time before you become completely and thoroughly addicted. :wink: However, I must inform you that you are generally ...

Here as requested, PoemPerson! ^^ Thanks again for using my thread. So, I'm going to have to agree with the other reviewers for the most part. There was just something ...

Anzius! *cowers in shame* I is a terrible person. So sorry that it took me so darn long to get to this! 'Tis my fault entirely-- bug me for another ...

Hey PoemPerson! Here as requested. Thanks for using my thread. ^_^ So. Like, wow. :shock: This was really good. I could find nothing glaring to point out, but I'll link ...