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Re: And there was drum roll chapter 1 part 1
Alright. So. You asked me for a critique ages ago on this, and it's taken me forever to get to it! *flails* So sorry. But it looks like you've already ...
May 4, 2009 -
Re: My Icarus
Hey, Lynn! Wow. You know what? I thought this was an incredibly enjoyable read. Of course, even the best poetry can be improved. But still! I was extremely impressed. :wink: ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: A Lesson in Dying
Hey Snoink! So, I think you should know that I am absolutely and undeniably terrified to review this. ^^ Just throwing that out there. I'm quaking in fear over here, ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Eternally Incomplete
Nice to meet you, Jones, and I hope you're enjoying yourself here at YWS? ^^ I'm Evi; nice to meet you! *firm handshake* ...okay, so enough with the pleasantries. :wink: ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: Ballet
Hola, Mouse, how are you today? I know how terribly boring it can get in Math class; next time I'll have to try and write a poem during the lecture! ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: saints fan
Hey, JBradford! Welcome to YWS. ^^ I think this is a quirky little poem; let me just point out some typos and suggestions I have to make it even better. ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Hotel
Hey Kisba! You know, your poetry always greatly entertains me, because I have such split opinions about it. Half of me absolutely adores it and loves the lack of capitalization ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Who are you?
Hey, Samsal! ^^ I saw that your poem only had one review, and I came to fix that! Bear with me, please. I'm going to refer to this character you're ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Seven Letters
Thanks for the request, Meepity darling! :D I hope I can be of assistance. I don't think I've ever read anything fo yours either, and I'm looking forward to it. ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Hey Tiger! ^^ Thank you very much for requesting a review from me! I'll try to do my best. :wink: :arrow: First of all I'm going to mainly repeat what ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: The mansion chapter 8 part 2
Almighty Evi here, at your service! XD thanks for using my thread again. *loves getting business* Now, as I said last time, my reviewing capabilities will be slightly hindered due ...
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: deleated
Hey, Erica! ^^ I'm Evi, and I decided to take a quick look at your poem. First of all, I'd like to say that I enjoyed it very much. I'll ...
Apr 23, 2009 -
Re: ForEver, ForNever, ForAlways (Prologue)
Eek! Lily, so sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I'm here as requested now! ^^ But her body ached for sleep and her mind cried ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Panwere
Hey, Ruthie! ^^ I'm Evi, and I'll take a look at this story today. :arrow: So, I, too, thought this was very well-written. And the plot looks good, although I ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Star Fallen
^^ Here as requested, Pop! Let's take a look, shall we? :wink: :arrow: I'm going to have to go into nit-pick mode, because I think overall this was rather well ...
Apr 19, 2009
