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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Light Sensitivity

    I love the imagery and I think I finally know what a poem is, words describing the indescribable. It's not just about the feelings, it's about describing the feeling with ...

    2h ago
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Still Life with Lamplight

    Wow, this gave me chills! It's gorgeous! Lilly, you are an artist!

    2h ago
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Just Like I Am

    I did not mean to out a extreme version of my own personality in my character. My subconscious is amazing at connections. Fun fact: has a chess personality quiz and ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Just Like I Am

    Poem made me want to rant so warning this is not a review. If I dare label it a review sue me! I'm typically the antagonist usually even with those ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vulnerability

    Yea, I was mostly writing how I felt in the moment which is why it could seem a little bland (lol) Thanks for the feedback!

    Oct 10
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vulnerability

    Well... was.

    Oct 9
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Vulnerability

    The cover is a bit much, no?

    Oct 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Keeper of the lost cities. What would happen if Sophie was the neverseen’s moonlark?

    I was guessing you were on the younger side. I will admit however I can be quite rushed in my own writing and it's something I need to work on ...

    Oct 1
  • Other » Film, Fantasy Re: UNIMAGINARY

    Here something: I think you could show the stakes in your pitch because currently it doesn't really feel like there's too much stakes. I don't really understand the emotional or ...

    Sep 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter

    And references to the ego? We might be more similar than first thought. Funny enough I ended up talking this way because of a character I created of who I ...

    Sep 26
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter

    Did I accidently not make it a review? Oops

    Sep 26
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Window - The 2nd Letter

    This honestly in one way reminded me of myself. Hahha! I sometimes speak this way.. especially online while ranting which made me blush with embarrassment and a sheepish smile. The ...

    Sep 26
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Humor Re: Family Trip at the Amusement Park

    Thanks! Well, I felt I had to make it shorter for school since it was a short assignment just to see our skills with making a plot (Raising action, climax, ...

    Sep 17
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Does Curiosity Kill a Cat?

    Fun fact: The saying goes "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back." Yes... I'm that petty ☝️🤓

    Sep 5
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: It was my birthday

    Also how it is already is nice but simple things always give me such grand ideas lol

    Aug 30


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