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  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: wings of glass

    Hello, Daisy here to review for you today! I do feel like you haven't twisted the cliché of dragons a lot, but your wonderful use of imagery is certainly original ...

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Dramatic, Other Re: Accelerated Reader Is Bad

    Hello, Daisy here to review! Firstly, oh my have you hit the nail on the head about Accelerated Reader. I'm fairly certain most of my year have stopped going to ...

    Nov 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Perfectionist

    Hello, Daisy here to offer you a review on this piece of writing! I love the use of parenthesis in this poem, like a little voice in the back of ...

    Nov 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ghost Horse

    Hello, Daisy here to review this piece of writing! Your title seems a little cliché, and I suggest perhaps choosing a stronger synonym for "ghost". Perhaps phantom? However, it did ...

    Nov 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Storm of Life

    Hello. I'm Daisy, here to review! First off, I love the title. It's interesting and manages to separate itself from other storm-related poem titles. The metaphor of the storm is ...

    Nov 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: #trapped

    Hi, Daisy here to review! Wow, I'm not usually a fan of rhyming poems but this is done so well, and has a great rhythm to it I felt like ...

    Nov 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Different

    Hello, Daisy here to review! First of all, I love how emotive this feels. This poem, I feel, deals with some heavy topics of acceptance and rejection. You handle them ...

    Nov 23, 2016


You are beautiful because you let yourself feel, and that is a brave thing indeed.
— Shinji Moon