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Re: wings of glass
Hello, Daisy here to review for you today! I do feel like you haven't twisted the cliché of dragons a lot, but your wonderful use of imagery is certainly original ...
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Accelerated Reader Is Bad
Hello, Daisy here to review! Firstly, oh my have you hit the nail on the head about Accelerated Reader. I'm fairly certain most of my year have stopped going to ...
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Perfectionist
Hello, Daisy here to offer you a review on this piece of writing! I love the use of parenthesis in this poem, like a little voice in the back of ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: Ghost Horse
Hello, Daisy here to review this piece of writing! Your title seems a little cliché, and I suggest perhaps choosing a stronger synonym for "ghost". Perhaps phantom? However, it did ...
Nov 25, 2016 -
Re: The Storm of Life
Hello. I'm Daisy, here to review! First off, I love the title. It's interesting and manages to separate itself from other storm-related poem titles. The metaphor of the storm is ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: #trapped
Hi, Daisy here to review! Wow, I'm not usually a fan of rhyming poems but this is done so well, and has a great rhythm to it I felt like ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Different
Hello, Daisy here to review! First of all, I love how emotive this feels. This poem, I feel, deals with some heavy topics of acceptance and rejection. You handle them ...
Nov 23, 2016
