EvangelineFire

Wow, this was absolutely fantastic. I'd started reading with the intention of giving you a review, but honestly this is just about perfect. Your writing is gorgeous and gripping, the ...

You're welcome. ;)

Yeah, I don't read harem manga stories so I wouldn't really know. And I wasn't meaning for you to answer all those questions I had for Keya, lol. xD I ...

So you're saying that he forgot he was in a fantasy world? Considering he's traveling with an elf and in a town with elves and dwarves, I don't think he ...

This is absolutely beautiful.

This is so beautiful.

I looked through your edits and it reads much better, especially the bit about your character being afraid in the beginning. It's so much better and I could picture his ...

Oh wow. D: This was really beautiful. I could feel the emotion. Did this actually happen to you? If so, I'm really sorry. I promise it gets better. The only ...

Hmm, I don't think sarcasm is the way to do it. You could have him get angry and demand to know his charges. This could cause an uproar in the ...

I mean [i.]something[/i] not b, haha.

All right, then. You're welcome. :) Also, to do the Italics it's [b.]something[/b.] without the periods.

You're welcome. :) I appreciate your opinion and I understand why you believe the way you believe. It seems you've definitely put a lot of thought into this subject, which ...