Evangelina

Thanks to both of you! Actually, maybe your from the UK because in the US it's spelled without the U. -Evang.

I dunno. I think I was trying to say that there is a song in this bit of nature that is unique and cannot be put into words. Due to ...

L2 of S2 is a bit confusing. I'm also not sure S1 ties into the end. However, the last line is a superb finish! I feel so...satisfied... I love this ...

Anthony Durham, sorry for the delay.

I love Maupassant

Hmmm. Oh this is good, this is very good. The dialogue could be worked on, perhaps add description. You have very few errors, so I won't be nitpicky. EDIT: Clau, ...

Hmm. Being part German myself--well, the name at least ;)--I was looking forward to this. I think it's wayy to short to get your full meaning out.

If you need to work on anything, I'd start with S2, the rhyming seems rather bland.

Man oh man, you need to work on dialogue.

ooh nice one, Clau!

Thank you so much, Clau!

....um? Alrighty then.

Creepy is right! WOW misty! It's great so far! however; the beginning could have been, more...I dunno. It should drag the reader in more. Look forward to ch. 2!

Blahh. Editing can be very obnoxious. D:

Hi! I'm...fine, a little bored. You?