Evangelina

Ok guys, I edited it! WOO!

Ok guys, I edited it! Please tell me what you think!

Yes--I meant it to be only one sentence; and I'll get rid of the -ing. Thanks!

HAHAHAHAHA. This is great! Tres bien, encore!

Thanks Cad.

Thanks guys! Actually gadi, I own that movie and love it!

Thanks guys! I meant it to be a dying diction--like the words are literally dying with all the words, lol. But will work on it.

Really? Strange. I fell in love with the book immeadiately. There was something about the simple yet overpowering style of the writing that took me by surprise. At times I ...

This is merely an outline. You have the basis; the plea, the questions, the need. Now turn it into the art of expression! -Evang.

GINN! This poem flows nicely. It's a bit childish, but what's wrong with being childish? S4L4 breaks up the rhythm, so that could be changed. Good job! -Evang.

Wow! For a first time poet, this is very good! Can't wait to see you improve...that will be astounding! -Evang.

Not really; just a myriad of thoughts.

Thank you very much!

Oh Kay, the italicized words are the ones she write on paper. And it's all psychological.

L4 of S1 explains the basic flaw of the entire poem. How ironic :D -Evang.