Evangelina

Reads a bit like a self-help book. Boring and unoriginal.

You know what? I change my mind. Don't change the last line; change the third line of stanza one. Darkness--do you see how you used Dark already? I was wrong. ...

..OH! I just noticed the "again" pattern. Sorry!

I might revise the last line to fit with the rest of the poem. Other than that, yes it works!

You know, if anyone has books they think are worthy, feel free to share!

BOOK OF THE WEEK Week 10/27-11/4 Book 3 Though he may not speak of them, the memories still dwell inside Jacob Jankowski's ninety-something-year-old mind. Memories of himself as a young ...

Catch-22, lmao.

(About the Thousand Splendid Suns) I know many people who liked it, but I personally thought that a subject so deep and sad should not have been discussed in such ...

Woo for Italo Calvino! If on a Winters night a traveler is an amazing book. I've recommended it to several people, though, and I think only a few of them ...

BOOK OF THE WEEK Week 10/10-10/17 Book 2 What more appropriate reading can there be for a dark winter's night than Calvino's masterpiece "If On A Winter's Night A Traveler"? ...

Thank you all so very much!

Haha, will do, locky :D

Alright thanks guys! Will edit, etc. etc.

Haha. Trident. I don't know really what to say, except that I LOVED IT! I dunno. There's something about the simple, no-nonsense business of ordering a 'which from a deli ...

No worries. Thank you muchly.