Evangelina

I hate Eragon, and the book that followed. It was simply not filling. It was stiff, a little boring, and moved so slowly.

Does everyone know that C.S. Lewis was a Christian and wrote this books, like Aslan was god or Jesus or something..I read an entire report but it seems to have ...

What was the last line again? I loved it. It scared me, however, that when compared the book was three times bigger than the first.

I choose Harry Potter because it's an easy read and quite entertaining. I think Tolkein built a better world, though.

I've read HDM and I loved them to death. Then I reread them...and I loved them even more!

Nice one. I love the word usage and phrasing. Only thing I would work on is punctuation. E.g. L4 of S1 should end in a period, methinks. -evangelina

Whence, I'm guessing you're Ed. You already know how I feel about this, but I'll flatter your ego anyways...BRILLIANT!

Well, the first line itself has a mistake, lol. I don't know what it is, exactly, but I didn't really enjoy this didn't drag me in. I'd work on the ...

KYLAN! This is fan-freakin-tastic. I'm Chinese meself, and I enjoy the names, the district, your imagination, and the part of the Laozi and Cunfu mix-up. It's all very realistic. Good ...

Awww. I loved this. It was...weird...the girl was like retarded or something...but it was so good! I loved the last line! -evangelina

Hmmm. Kudos for an awesome title. You have great imagery and good word choice. Sometimes the ideas don't make sense to me or they seem to be very vague. And ...

Wow. This is the first time I've read this type of poetry! It's outstanding, althought a little confusing--Im used to the characters being fleshed out [although since it's a poem ...

Thanks you all! I don't know if I should post more--can this thread be deleted when the novel is finished?

For a two line poem, it had great depth and meaning. Well done.

This is very good. I didn't have time to go back and read the other parts, so I assumed stuff in places. Characterization is excellent. And HI! from TW.