Evander

This is all the first draft. I'll fix what you pointed out! I plan with elaborating in Dylan's death in the next chapter or so. (In the final draft, these ...

Kylan was mentioned the second and third chapter. He's Rease's brother. ;)

Are you going to add more? Or can I review it now?

Yes, once you know the grammar rules, I guess you can break them. However, you might want to make an authors note explaining that 'This is rule I'm breaking'.

Flavour was spelled correctly, Kat. They used the British spelling.

Get onto chat, now. It's boring...

However, I want to see what the essay is. Might be fun to read!

You have every right to be proud. You butchered my piece, I was simply repaying the favour.

I won't edit this, because I like to see how much better I have gotten. Maybe I'll re-write this completely. Just not this draft. ;) Thanks for the review!

This was saved as a draft! XD

Thanks for the review! Would you liked to be notified when we post?

We've written the next chapter. Just waiting for tomorrow to post it!

Hm... I think I'll do that! Thanks!

You did chapter 12!

This chapter was a switch of scenes. If that makes any sense. Last chapter she was being dragged up the stairs, now she's in someones room. I guess I could ...