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Evander

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  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Humor Re: Frost Lark News 5/7/17

    Heyo, Sheyren! I'm here to leave a quick review. I haven't read any previous editions, so I apologize in advance if I get anything wrong. The tone of Frost Lark ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Health, Science Fiction Re: Hospitle story

    Hello, Queen! I'm here for a quick review. And now hearing the word ‘milk duct’ is making me think of the tv show The Incredible Dr. Pol about a veterinarian ...

    May 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Waves

    Heyo, I'm here for a quick review! This doesn't feel really impactful, although it does certainly have potential. I do wish there were more ocean based similes throughout this, along ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Derek

    Hey, Kazeybear! I'm here to review your poem. Honestly, I liked this poem. Its overall first impression was nice, if a bit sad. There weren't really any major problems that ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Sorry.

    Hello! I'm here for a quick poetry review. I am broken. I am shattered pieces on the floor. I am picking myself up bit by bit, rebuilding myself better again. ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fall and Winter

    Heyo, Caitlin! First, I want to preface this with the fact that it's been a long time since I've seriously critiqued poetry, so I apologize in advance. This poem very ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Richard Nixon: The Sequel.

    Hello! I read The Love of Richard Nixon in hopes that it would help me gain a better understanding of the world that's being presented, yet I still walk away ...

    Apr 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: The Hunger Games: A Flame Burns Brighter in the Dark

    Heyo, Cate! I'm here for a quick review. It's been a bit since I've read the Hunger Games trilogy, so I apologize for any mistakes regarding the details of the ...

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Imagine: Cuz’ everything starts out with detention (or at least these things do)

    Heyo, HowlingForCookies! This is going to be a quick review, so let's get started. As far as a first chapter goes, this falls a little short for my tastes. While ...

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please Remember Me (Chapters 6-10)

    This is Castor dropping in for a review! The first paragraph starts off with a bunch of telling. Instead of being shown that Brent was popular in the first five ...

    Mar 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please Remember Me (Chapters 1-5)

    This is Castor dropping in for a review! I saw a few chapters of this still in the Green Room, so I decided to give it a look! Firstly, I ...

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Castellum

    Hey, Oswin! Let's just jump straight into the review. One of the biggest things is the paragraph breaks. The first paragraph in this chapter had 21 sentences, which is quite ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: The New Generation--Chapter 15: Almost... There

    Hey, Artemis! I'm here for a quick Review Day review! I know that I've reviewed a previous chapter, so hopefully jumping in right here won't be too much of an ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every Detail

    Alright, Cello! Let's just see if this review is coherent, okay? :P To be perfectly honest, I can't spot any major flaws in this work and I'm not sure if ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: A SAGA of sterotypes

    Hey, Cello! Uh, this is my 250th review, so uh, the pressure is on right now. Let's jump right into the review, shall we? I really appreciate the message behind ...

    May 24, 2016


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