Evander

Hey! So, you actually posted this... I. Love/Hate. You. Sorta. ;) Now, this is...interesting. The way it began had me thinking that this would be a fairy tale. It "drew" ...

Hey! Raven here to do a review! Aw...bombs dropped. I ponder what the Germans plans are... Is the layout of this so the Germans are literally right next to Stacy ...

Hello! Raven here to review as requested! You asked me to focus on the characters, so I will do exactly that. I apologize if I get off track. Jamie seems ...

Hello! Raven here to review as requested! I have just read chapter one, and I must say I am impressed. When I realized McCaw was a bird, oh wow, I ...

Hi! Yes! Another chapter! Aw... Stacy got shot... I am wondering why she had an attitude. It makes her less likable. It seems like she speaks before she thinks, or ...

Hello! Raven here for a review! I like the story so far. This chapter gives us insight to the character's mind. Them wishing to belong to some clan of sorts. ...

Hello! Raven here for a review! Congratulations on finishing your excellent novel! I didn't realize that 'till now. Aw... the ending was so good! I did not expect that, I ...

Hello, Raven here for a quick review! I like the story you have. Your MC becoming a fallen angel, I love it. Especially because it's for love... Just a few ...

Raven here! I must say, I like the story you have here! He's a very, odd man, I suppose. Blaming everything on someone. From what I have, Orin is the ...

Hello! Raven here for a quick review! Therese covered a lot of what I was going to say, but, I will give my two cents. OMG, in the very beginning ...

Hello! Raven here for a review! I would like to say: I love your story. The description is wonderful! I ponder... will you be giving description advice in the forums? ...

Hello! Raven here for a quick review! This is so cute! I like what you made! When I was this age I wrote about poverty, and you're writing light happy ...

Hey! Raven here for a review, as requested on the teams forum. Now, I like what you have here. A batgirl that's awesome. Your poor MC, being different than every ...

Hello! Raven here to review! I'm really liking this story! I love books about war. Your, poor, poor, MC. Dealing with all the boys, poor her... Nitpicks! My first complaint ...

Hello! I am here to review your lovely zombie apocalypse story! I love the names you chose! Cherry and Heather are very beautiful names. Zombie apocalypse stories are often hard ...