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Re: I remember
I love this poem purely for the genuine emotions you're writing with. Your use of metaphors to illustrate your point is marvelous. "But after that day, the apples have never ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: Alone somehow
This is an emotional poem. The way you wrote it made it clear that there were genuine feelings attached to the words. I sensed a touch of desperation in the ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: The real you
I like the tone of the poem, that is the overtone of fear. Fear of the unknown in relationships is quite common, and nothing to worry about. I like how ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: Magpie
Obviously, I love the fact that the poem is in the shape of a cat! I mean, who wouldn't appreciate that? Now, to the words themselves. I like the frantic, ...
May 24, 2016 -
Re: Thanataphobic Thoughts
I love this. The general sense of panic you capture here is spectacular. This poem brings to mind another poem by John Keats called, "When I Have Fears That I ...
May 22, 2016
