Evalynne

Hi! I'm here for a review for you! :) Okay, so first off this was a pretty interesting piece to review. You have what seems like a solid basis for ...

I really love this, and the character is very well-developed. I just noticed two sort of flaws in this. One was your informality. Most of your writing is written formally ...

Well, um, I don't really know what to say... Um, okay, hopefully my review will help you to improve! 'hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Nidara squinted at the page open in front of her. In a size much smaller than the rest of the text, was written a chunk. She strained to read it. ...

Oh, I finally found this again! I was EveningSharks, but I couldn't log on and so I made a new account, which is this, so I shall now proceed to ...

Hello! Eva(lynne) here for a review! Gosh, I haven't done on eof these in simply AAAAAGGGGGGEEEEEESSSSSSS, and do excuse my informality there, I promise I shall not do such a ...

Ooh, this is interesting! I like it! Your grammar is mostly spot on, but it seems that there are some errors in it. Well, actually, quite a few errors, but ...

Hi! It's me, here to do a review on this piece of work! Hopefully you won't find this to be too harsh, although, quite frankly, there is rather a lot ...

Okay, review time! Eek! Great start! Though this is only the first chapter, I already feel I have gotten to know Cyrus very well, and I have to say, if ...

Wow! First off, I'd like to say that you are an amazing writer! I love the idea of this piece, and your imagery is beautiful. Your grammar is just about ...

Wow, this is so, so good! I love your metaphors and imagery, and I also love the overall idea of your poem. It is really well written, and although I ...

Hello! I have not used the site in a while, and reading your work reminded me to come on more often! It it is a very interesting idea, and I ...

Hello! Pleased to meet you! Um, first thing to note: The rating. It's E - Everyone, but it includes swearing? Probably just a mistake, but I thought I'd point it ...

Hi! First off, can I say that this is a really good idea for a story, in my opinion, and I can't wait to see where it goes! I love ...

First off, I'd just like to say; this is really good! You've certainly set the standards high for this site! I love the plotline, and feel this is very interesting. ...